Autumn rains

[alongtimegone]

Nice one Marty.

[Heather]

A lovely tribute Marty. I hope he got to see the autumn colour one last time.

Heather

[Neville Briggs]

The longer lines you've used, I think are good to make the mood. Some of the metre seems a bit irregular ( no problem in my book ) but I think that also helps to make the right mood for this picture.

[Bob Pacey]

Same here Marty I love the subject matter but just cannot pick up the beat.


Bob

[warooa]

Yes a good tribute to the man.

Marty

[warooa]

a few of them tried to read it aloud to the family but couldnt get though it

crook metre?

[Bob Pacey]

Personalised Poetry Marty the great untapped avenue of our age.


I do a lot and the there is nothing better then being invited to read it out or have it read at a function be it a birthday , wedding or sadly a funeral.

Well done mate

Bob

[keats]

I recited The Fire At Ross's Farm at a Cremation, and they threw me out.

[manfredvijars]

crook metre?

Nahhhh, it was Crookwell ...