AGAIN AND AGAIN
I got this poem written out
and had the rhyme just so, but then
I found a gremlin in the rhyme
and had to set it out again.
This process caused me quite some pain;
to have to do the work again.
They say a poem's not what's written
a poem's what you have rewritten.
So, I must now take up the strain
if thinking out those lines again,
and when I'm done, let's hope that when
I check it; it's not wrong again !!
AGAIN AND AGAIN
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AGAIN AND AGAIN
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: AGAIN AND AGAIN
'Onya Nev,
It is all about the drafts isn't it!
Ron
It is all about the drafts isn't it!
Ron
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