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An evening walk

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2014 6:14 pm
by Neville Briggs
AN EVENING WALK


The old black kelpie knows the track
and seems exhilarated, as
the day’s last light is fading fast
to shadows in the cooling air.
Across the flats, the ordered fields
are neatly fenced by wire, between
the paddocks where the soil is ploughed
and where the lucerne’s thick and green.
From lush long feed and silage bales,
the cattle graze contentedly,
arranged by skilful farmer’s work
done carefully and patiently.

But high above the narrow road,
the deep expanse of space and sky,
reveals another hand at work,
responsive to a cosmic eye.
Magenta stains and turquoise hues
paint out the sun’s last golden light.
The moon comes up; a floating pearl,
lit up against the deep dark night.
As stars swarm out in millions like
the creatures in an endless sea
their unimagined weaving forms
a coruscating tapestry.

I wonder how the elements,
that move in that eternal plan,
devised the restless longing heart;
and where was love when time began.
I cannot touch the galaxies,
my feet scrape on the stony way
reminding me that I belong
to mundane things that pass away.
But from the vastness infinite,
can that great thought that set it there
know how we walk along the lane,
or notice this old trudging pair.

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2014 9:55 pm
by Heather
That's lovely Neville, you big old softie you. I especially like the second stanza and the idea of the moon as a floating pearl. Noice, very noice.

Heather :)

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 5:29 am
by Bob Pacey
What is Noice ?

Very well done Neville,

Cheers Bob

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 8:22 am
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Matt, Heather, Bob. You are right Matt, it's an old one posted before but I have worked on it in a few places, I am still not 100% satisfied but I think it goes better now.

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 8:37 am
by Ron
Great stuff Nev, enjoyed it, well done.

Ron

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 12:48 pm
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Ron. :)

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:58 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
That was a delight to read Neville - thank you for sharing it :D

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2014 11:20 pm
by Catherine Lee
Love this Neville - beautiful imagery, and it gave me goosebumps.

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:50 am
by Neville Briggs
Thanks for the comments Catherine. :)

Re: An evening walk

Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2014 12:21 pm
by Bob Pacey
Bet it has been a while since you gave a young lady goosebumps Neville ;) ;) ;)


Take em while you cam mate.


Bob