If you see a fat man, quite jolly, bit weird
Dressed in a red suit, with a great flowing beard.
Chuckling and laughing through most of the day,
While flying around in a bloody great sleigh
Laden with pressies and pulled by rain deer
Let's face it, you're probably drunk!
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Santa?
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Neville Briggs
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Re: Santa?
reindeer....get it right. 
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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manfredvijars
Re: Santa?
Its auto-correct and I'm lazy ... goangetstuft ...
(All the best for the New Year Nev) ...
(All the best for the New Year Nev) ...
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Re: Santa?
so your rain deer were not a play on words - not spirit gods bringing rain as a gift? Damnation! And I thought that was so good 
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Re: Santa?
Santa never made it to Rocky the deer cull was on.
Bob
Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!