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Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2015 6:41 pm
by Heather

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2015 7:39 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Can you buy them things online - :lol: how lovely this is.

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 6:24 am
by Neville Briggs
Well done Heather. Great to see you posting this :) Neat concise little piece.

You've been babysitting again. :lol:

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:17 am
by Bob Pacey
I was waiting for one more verse to finish off ?

Seems to sort of hang ?

Bob

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:31 am
by Neville Briggs
You'll get hang. It doesn't need anything more.

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:37 am
by Heather
Thanks Maureen. Some things are priceless and you simply can't buy them.

You're always wanting more Bob. :lol: The last line sums it up.

Not babysitting Neville, this one was inspired by a friend.

I only wrote one poem last year so hopefully I'm off to a good start - it's a start anyway. As Leonard Cohen said, "I don’t think you can write novels on the road. You need a certain stability." Same with poetry I think.

Heather :)

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:59 am
by Bob Pacey
Cryptic clues Neville ? what ya trying to say ? spit it out !

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Bob

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 8:05 am
by Neville Briggs
Fixed the typo Heather. :)


Not cryptic Bob, that's just a saying.

If it needed any more Heather would have put it in. I think that if the reader reads Heather's poem in less than two minutes they are going too fast and then will miss the completion. Poetry is not about ' once upon a time....blah blah blah bah ...............they lived happily ever after. Amen. Next

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 8:08 am
by Bob Pacey
Does the size 150 next have a meaning ?


Bob

Re: Knowing Without Asking

Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 8:09 am
by Heather
Gotcha Neville. :)

Two minutes might be a bit slow for this one Neville, you'd start to sound like a Queenslander! Maybe one minute - twice! :lol: