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Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 6:55 am
by Neville Briggs
VERSE FOR MOTHER

It's cold outside, too early for the sun
and you are covered in your knitted blanket.
You should be warm, but yet your face is cool,
the blush that lit your cheeks is all but gone.

There's four of us, you knew from our first breath;
four, joined together by a bond
that never can be changed or pulled apart
until the day that we are called by death.

There's no more dinners, no more cakes to bake,
those washing days and sewing nights are over.
No more children's birthday cards and presents;
but nothing's done in vain, done for love's sake.

You're safe now from the demons that pursued you
and no more anxious thoughts need press your mind.
It's up to us to build on what you left us,
your task is all complete, no more to do.

We'll brush your hair and gently wipe your face;
that's how you did it for us years ago.
We'll tuck you in and say a little prayer
asking that you can be at rest and peace
now that you've gone to sleep.

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 7:50 am
by manfredvijars
Heartfelt Nev .... :cry:

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 7:59 am
by warooa
delightful :)

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 9:01 am
by Heather
Sad :(

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 10:07 am
by r.magnay
Nice Neville, albeit a bit sad...

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 10:14 am
by Maureen K Clifford
written with love - doesn't get any better than that Neville :cry:

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 2:38 pm
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Manfred.
Good on ya Matt. The contribution of the ordinary person is as precious as the most clever.
Thanks Marty.
Sad but not all sad, Heather.
Thanks Ross.
Thanks Maureen. Apologies, I used the homework prompt but posted here. ;)

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 4:42 pm
by Terry
All the things already said Neville - the love lives on.

Terry

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 9:22 pm
by Catherine Lee
Lovely and poignant Neville. I like the line 'but nothing's done in vain, done for love's sake' - very true

Re: Verse for Mother

Posted: Mon May 11, 2015 5:51 am
by Cropduster
Very nice and clearly written from the heart.