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Canis Major
Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 8:17 pm
by manfredvijars
Canis Major
(c) 2006 M. Vijars
Miss "T" ... (9th August 1996 - 29th March 2010)
Re: Canis Major
Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 9:31 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
So true Manfred - the only love that money can buy and given unreservedly. Your girl is beautiful - was she a Shepherd /Kelpie cross?
Re: Canis Major
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:38 am
by manfredvijars
Indeed Mauzy ... Miss "T" was a Shep/Boxer cross ... and the best nature from both breeds ..
Re: Canis Major
Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:51 am
by Neville Briggs
Good one Manfred. You've used enjambments and caesuras to make a more conversational voice across the metric structure which I think is a skill that should be used more often by our bush poets. You've done it well.
There's another dog, the cynic. Comes from the Greek word "kynis" which means a dog because the philosopher Diogenes with his churlish pronouncements was said to be whining or snivelling like a dog.