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Last Week's Rain

Posted: Fri May 27, 2016 9:24 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
Perhaps there are a few scientists out there who can suggest that I am vaguely on the right track with the last line of this poem…


Last Week’s Rain

The rain began on Monday. It was spitting – not much more,
Yet still I felt relief to come inside and close the door.
On Tuesday it was heavier – you couldn’t stay outside.
You had to find some sheltered spot to snuggle in, and hide.
By Wednesday it was bucketing – it pelted cats and dogs.
The drains were overflowing, and the rivers carried logs.
Thursday was ridiculous, with water in the sky.
We’d lived so long with wetness now that not a thing was dry.
Friday was the day it all began to feel quite creepy.
Even solid lumps of rock turned soft and very seepy.
Saturday it started, as the countries started melting,
And all the former way of things was dealt a dreadful belting.
By Sunday it was finished – rock and sea had turned to one,
And Earth stretched like a sausage as it spun around the Sun.

© Stephen Whiteside 26.05.2016

Re: Last Week's Rain

Posted: Sat May 28, 2016 5:24 pm
by Heather
Oh do go on Stephen, it wasn't that bad! My dams are almost empty - we need a lot more! Funny poem but.

Re: Last Week's Rain

Posted: Sat May 28, 2016 5:43 pm
by Stephen Whiteside
Ta.

Re: Last Week's Rain

Posted: Sat May 28, 2016 6:32 pm
by Shelley Hansen
I'm still bowled away by the vision of earth as a stretched sausage!!!

Re: Last Week's Rain

Posted: Sat May 28, 2016 9:32 pm
by Neville Briggs
Heather, Stephen has a poetic license, as he is old enough to use hyperbole.

Re: Last Week's Rain

Posted: Tue May 31, 2016 4:28 pm
by Bob Pacey
Don't know but they reckon it was raining in Longreach today Yahooooo


Bob

Re: Last Week's Rain

Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 10:22 am
by thestoryteller
Interesting how we all react to rain Stephen.

Rather diversified comments from who and where we are, what we do etc.

Enjoyed the read.



Mer.

Re: Last Week's Rain

Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2016 11:40 am
by Stephen Whiteside
Thanks, Merv.