Nights on the stripping table

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Re: Nights on the stripping table

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:16 pm

Yuk - sounds a horrible job
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Re: Nights on the stripping table

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:15 pm

If I were you Marty, I would do a bit of revision and work that up a bit, it's a great theme, a very original experience and I reckon worth the effort of doing well for a winning poem.
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Re: Nights on the stripping table

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:35 pm

Hey Marty my first job was bailing out the sump behind a butchers shop where all the fat used to get stuck in the hairs on your legs. Was not very popular at school. I wonder why.


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Re: Nights on the stripping table

Post by Heather » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:38 pm

What have you done this time Robert? :roll:

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Re: Nights on the stripping table

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:39 pm

Did it also get stuck to your moustache at school :roll:
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Re: Nights on the stripping table

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Apr 19, 2011 6:41 pm

Oh Heather i would have had to stand on my head ?

Gonna fix that bloody i I shift key one day.

Used to help the butcher make the sausages as well. Never eat sausages now !!!!


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