This seems to hearken back to the old mediaeval ballads. Gothic stories I think of them. They are fascinating and I think you have done a good job in relating the Australian bush to the old tradition. No need to pick technical things, we know you have progressed

it's more interesting just to enjoy the pictures here.
I reckon Manfred, you could do some more from your mother's heritage influence that would go well and be different and original . I think that, the strange and mysterious belong in the bush poetry genre, well and truly.