Mal's Poem

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Mal McLean
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Mal's Poem

Post by Mal McLean » Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:59 pm

I have taken this poem down to have a think about it.

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Last edited by Mal McLean on Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Robyn
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Post by Robyn » Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:06 pm

Nice one Mal... evocative and thoughtful.
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Post by Heather » Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:09 pm

Simply beautiful Mal. I really like that. Working on an autumn poem myself - (might take a few years though!) I'm going to save this one to my favourites.

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Mal McLean
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Post by Mal McLean » Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:59 pm

Thanks Robyn and Heather. It's always good to get such nice feedback. Makes me :)

My wife Chrissy said to me earlier tonight that it was a shame she had to work on the last weekend of summer. I told her she was my autumn girl anyway..... :idea: ......10 minutes later I had the finished poem. As the muse has been off visiting lately I was more than surprised :o

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Post by Heather » Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:23 pm

Wish the muse would do that for me Mal! :)
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Post by mummsie » Sat Feb 25, 2012 10:35 am

Wow, love this one Mal, very poetic.

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sat Feb 25, 2012 10:41 am

Eloquently beautiful - well done

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