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homework w/e/ 2/4/12 Acrostic name

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Mar 22, 2012 7:46 am

Briggses are a sturdy mob,
Of solid Saxon strain.
Our forebears roved the savage sea,
Futtocks firm on each campaign.
Heaven brought us to this land.
Engaged in honest duty,
Astraya's now the place we rove
Despite that red-haired beauty.

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Post by manfredvijars » Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:16 am

... flapping futtocks in the wind would be a worry too. So make sure you tie them down ... :D

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Post by william williams » Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:49 am

Fut tock it ear Fut tock it there Fut tock it everyware

Neville he done it ossifer dats what was told to the constibull

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Mar 22, 2012 12:15 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: and not a Briggs and Stratton in sight which is what I at first thought you were writing about - you boofhead :lol: :lol: :lol: Very clever Neville I'm still giggling
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Post by Robyn » Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:21 pm

Love it Neville, and futtock sounds much better than ship's rib (refering to previous thread about use of language/ choosing good words).
Well done :D :D
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Post by Robyn » Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:23 pm

Also, since when have you been known as boofhead :?: :?: :!: :!:
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Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Mar 23, 2012 7:53 am

Ah ha The penny finally drops !!! Robyn ;) ;)

Nev can I talk to you about your self esteme. 8-) 8-)


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Post by Wendy Seddon » Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:26 am

Talking nick-names now?

Oh to
Woo,
Lovely
You.

Hoo! Hoo!
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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:22 pm

To wit -ty for me
to woo - Tell. Who?

Owly do :lol: :lol:
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Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:54 pm

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I read all the replies :lol:

Maureen,I realize that it is just a bit of pretty ordinary stuff, but I haven't been able to get anything going lately, so I just plunged in and sort of put down anything that sounded a bit facetious and a play on some words.
And Maureen isn't homework meant to be exercise, not necessarily to turn out polished or " complete ' works.


Ah Robyn, Bob, ....Boofhead, just seemed a bit of a whimsical title to use.

I loved Boofhead the cartoon man. My favourite cartoon is where Boofhead applies to the Registrar General to change his name,
The clerk at the counter says
" What is your name "
Boofhead replies " Boofhead "
The clerk says " No wonder you want change your name, what do you want to be called now ? "
Boofhead says " Blockhead "

:lol: :lol: :lol: ........... :roll: well I thought it was funny. ;)
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