Glimmers of what might have been

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Re: Glimmers of what might have been

Post by mummsie » Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:32 pm

You are on a roll Marty! Another good one and quick off the mark as well.
Well done.

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Re: Glimmers of what might have been

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Jun 05, 2012 1:07 pm

Totally agree with Sue - and this is a beauty Marty

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Re: Glimmers of what might have been

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:56 pm

That's well written, Marty, you've got the idea of the ballad form very neatly.
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Re: Glimmers of what might have been

Post by Irene » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:08 am

Well done Marty - enjoyed it.

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