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This is a test – some will get it but other will struggle.
It is all about understanding
and getting away with murder.
Some would think it out of focus
and even perhaps walking the road to ruin.
But such criticisms are like drops of water
rolling down a window pane and puddling
on the sill below.
I merely wonder if anybody is coming up for air.
Maureen Clifford © 10/12
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12
This will be a test so you say but I will struggle to try and get it
But it's a question? That I don't understanding
but if I find out how. Can I get away with murder.
for this story that you tell. Is out of focus
for when you who walk the road to ruin.
why do you criticize the actions, like a drop of water
that roll down a window pane to below.
So I merely wonder, if the answer is, coming up for air.
bw
But it's a question? That I don't understanding
but if I find out how. Can I get away with murder.
for this story that you tell. Is out of focus
for when you who walk the road to ruin.
why do you criticize the actions, like a drop of water
that roll down a window pane to below.
So I merely wonder, if the answer is, coming up for air.
bw
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Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12
huh???? 

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12
Oh Neville I was hoping for more than a Huh
My sad attempt at trying to stir something by sticking a bit of free verse in here . I figured everyone must be holding their breath waiting for ??????? something
Our homework seems is too hard this time round and no one want's to play in the sandpit

Well Marty did and Bill stuck his nose in but........................oh well never mind
I'll get over it.

My sad attempt at trying to stir something by sticking a bit of free verse in here . I figured everyone must be holding their breath waiting for ??????? something
Our homework seems is too hard this time round and no one want's to play in the sandpit


Well Marty did and Bill stuck his nose in but........................oh well never mind



Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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Re: ?????? h/work w.e. 22.10.12
Maureen, I wasn't huhing on the verse, I was not sure what you were meaning to say
I always have a think about the homework, I can't always come up with something to post. And I always read the ones that do get posted.
Sometimes I even annoy them by commenting.



I always have a think about the homework, I can't always come up with something to post. And I always read the ones that do get posted.




Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.