Life's Disappointments
Life's Disappointments
I wrote this in a reflective moment when I was feeling a bit down...
Life's Disappointments
There's no point regretting what I might have been
If I lived my life over again
But I envy risk-takers; those people who've seen
Adventures beyond those of the pen.
What held me back was the courage to fly
Beyond the bounds of my home;
The walls that enclosed me I saw as too high
And I missed any chances to roam.
So focused was I on adhering to rules
And conventions one must not defy:
Marriage, security, children and schools
That excitement just passed me by.
There are so many things I'd like to have done
And knowledge that I might have gleaned;
Thrills untasted that would have been fun
But life, real life intervened.
Life's Disappointments
There's no point regretting what I might have been
If I lived my life over again
But I envy risk-takers; those people who've seen
Adventures beyond those of the pen.
What held me back was the courage to fly
Beyond the bounds of my home;
The walls that enclosed me I saw as too high
And I missed any chances to roam.
So focused was I on adhering to rules
And conventions one must not defy:
Marriage, security, children and schools
That excitement just passed me by.
There are so many things I'd like to have done
And knowledge that I might have gleaned;
Thrills untasted that would have been fun
But life, real life intervened.
Re: Life's Disappointments
I think a lot of people could relate to that Marion but you know, it's never too late to have even the smallest of adventures.
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Re: Life's Disappointments
Interesting Marion.
Neville
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Re: Life's Disappointments
Is that interesting poem Marion or Marion who is interesting Nev ?
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The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Marion is the poem isn't she ? 

Neville
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" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: Life's Disappointments
Interesting question to an interesting question to an interesting comment.
I wonder what the answer is.
I wonder what the answer is.
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Re: Life's Disappointments
Some of the biggest risks involve adventures 'of the pen'.
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
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Re: Life's Disappointments
Yes. Many's the time I have wished I could 'un-send' a message.
Re: Life's Disappointments
As Heather said, Marion . . . it's never too late - don't let your regrets take place of your dreams.
Marty
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