Looking Back

[Glenny Palmer]

Hey Stephen,
This is really a good piece, both in structure and message. I think you should do more with it re circulation & comp entry. Sad as the poem is, I really do like it.
Thank you, & Cheeers
Glenny

[Stephen Whiteside]

Thanks Zondrae, Vic, Glenny. Given ME a bit to think about!

[David Campbell]

A powerful piece, Stephen, and Glenny's right...it's well worth considering as a competition entry, if you're interested in pursuing that path. (Although you'll need to watch out for those irritating 'previous publication' rules!)

Cheers
David

[Stephen Whiteside]

Thanks, David.

[Catherine Lee]

Fantastic poem Stephen - poignant and powerful.

[Stephen Whiteside]

Thank you, Catherine.

[Leonie]

Yep, I'm in total agreement. This is one those 'WOW' poems that don't come along all that often.

[Stephen Whiteside]

Hmmm... Thank you, Leonie.