homework mid june 2013 - Looking down

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Re: homework mid june 2013 - Looking down

Post by David Campbell » Mon May 27, 2013 2:04 pm

I did get it into the magazine, Marty. If you check page 11 of last year's October-November edition, you'll find a long article I wrote that was specifically addressed to competition organisers about changing their rules...particularly relating to previous publication. And there was a poem of mine on the same page. Anything else you want?

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Re: homework mid june 2013 - Looking down

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu May 30, 2013 1:32 pm

Your first line made me giggle Marty (sorry) :oops: I thought only God did that :roll: Technically speaking of course that is not true. I often look down from my pedestal only problem is it gets a bit wobbly at times.

Incontinence pads are helpful when suffering from LBL...OK Yes I knew you were saying that tongue in cheek - for some of us though it is a serious problem.

My only nit pick and I am sure Neville will correct me if I am wrong is that by definition is a sage not a wise man. That being the case the use of the word wise would be superfluous. Other than that though it rolls along nicely. Well done.

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Re: homework mid june 2013 - Looking down

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu May 30, 2013 5:03 pm

I heard you the first time Marty :lol: :lol: :lol: The only time I use sage is with onion when stuffing chickens, but whatever rows your boat sunshine ;)
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