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Post by manfredvijars » Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:00 pm

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Re: Slayer

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:37 am

The final book of the Bible called Revelation or The Apocalypse calls death, the last enemy, and predicts defeat of the last enemy. ;)

You've got a bit of melancholy in your verse of late Manfred. Anything we can do to lift your spirits? ;) :)
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Post by manfredvijars » Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:42 am

Hahaha, goodonya Nev, that piece is three years old :)
Lift my spirits? Yes, keep them coming - Whiskey that is ... :D

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Re: Slayer

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:46 am

You !!! :lol:
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Re: Slayer

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Jun 04, 2013 10:38 am

Manfred, your poem paints an ugly, but unfortunately, 'hard facts' truth of today's world. I wish it didn't have to be. :(
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Re: Slayer

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Jun 04, 2013 6:46 pm

Three years is a long time to be depressed Manny ? Lots of empty bottles there !


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