Devil woman

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Devil woman

Post by warooa » Wed Aug 21, 2013 8:18 am

Oh Devil woman, treat me bad, I’ve been a naughty boy.
I’ve been to Mother Marys and confessed amidst her joy.
I’ve been intoxicated by her pure angelic ways,
and swept beneath her sultry spell and her vivacious gaze.
I’ve supped upon her nectar whilst entranced by those blue eyes,
and prayed for lights upon the hill, whilst lured between her thighs.

Oh Devil woman, save my sordid soul and strip me bare,
and wipe away those memories until no one is there.
Rescind my carnal tendencies and thrash me with your spite,
then fill that void with darkness and sedate my appetite.
In Mother Mary’s web of pleasure I’ve become entwined,
but Devil woman, tryst me, you were always on my mind. :twisted: :?

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Re: Devil woman

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:40 pm

:o :o
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Re: Devil woman

Post by warooa » Wed Aug 21, 2013 4:12 pm

Nev's lost for words?? :lol:

Surely not :P

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Re: Devil woman

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:42 pm

Yes :lol:
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Re: Devil woman

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Aug 21, 2013 5:54 pm

and the Australian content and Australian people are where exactly? :lol: :lol: :lol: Oh hang on I get it - you were filling in time waiting for your mate Slim - of course ...silly me :? :roll: :oops:
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Re: Devil woman

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:33 am

The devil woman could be mother nature Maureen where is your imagination ?

Oh and may I remind you ??? :lol: :lol: :lol: I've been known to make the odd heart beat with flaming passion and desire in my time :lol: :lol: but heaving bosoms , throbbing loins and tangled sheets


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Re: Devil woman

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:41 am

Were you in my fantasy Bob? I don't recall. Maybe you were the bloke supplying the grass :roll: 8-)
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Re: Devil woman

Post by Heather » Thu Aug 22, 2013 12:24 pm

Pity you two don't live next door to each other! :lol:


Getting hot in the tropics Marty? Thanks for the giggle. :)

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Re: Devil woman

Post by warooa » Sat Aug 24, 2013 2:31 am

Glad you're giggling :P but I wasn't being funny :|

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Re: Devil woman

Post by Terry » Mon Aug 26, 2013 4:54 pm

Hmmn, Perhaps I'd better keep out of this one.

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