BRUMBY
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BRUMBY
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Glenny Palmer
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Re: BRUMBY
Mannie this is so sad. You have some bonza word pictures in here, and a refreshingly different structure....but I suspect this is a first draft? The poem's obvious potential deserves getting the Brasso out I reckon.
(I also reckon the rest of us are in too much of a hurry to read through what looks like a long, long poem....slackos...but I'm having a 'day off' today, so lucky you.
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Cheeers mate, & thanks for sharing.
Glenny
(I also reckon the rest of us are in too much of a hurry to read through what looks like a long, long poem....slackos...but I'm having a 'day off' today, so lucky you.
)Cheeers mate, & thanks for sharing.
Glenny
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