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The Lion's View

Post by Heather » Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:18 pm


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Re: The Lion's View

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:44 pm

Love it Heather - excuse my ignorance but where is this place of which you write? A gold town from long ago perhaps? You have some great images - I loved the goats ignoring fences, as they do. Nicely crafted

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Re: The Lion's View

Post by Bob Pacey » Sun Mar 30, 2014 7:04 am

Yes Yes Yes

Great to see you writing again H

Poetry painting a picture wonderful images

Never seen Hoiking used before but it fits


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Re: The Lion's View

Post by warooa » Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:05 am

Yes I liked hoiking skirts.

Evocatively written Heather.

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Re: The Lion's View

Post by Bob Pacey » Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:16 am

Are you sure it was the hoiking you liked Marty or what was underneath.,

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Re: The Lion's View

Post by Ron » Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:20 am

Enjoyed that Heather
Well done.
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Re: The Lion's View

Post by warooa » Sun Mar 30, 2014 8:59 am

Bob Pacey wrote:Are you sure it was the hoiking you liked Marty or what was underneath.,

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Nuthin' like a good skirt hoik in a town of sin ;)

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Re: The Lion's View

Post by Heather » Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:03 pm

You'd only see ankles you wackers!

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Re: The Lion's View

Post by Bob Pacey » Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:09 pm

Don't call Marty a Wacker whatever that means :o :o :o :o


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Re: The Lion's View

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Mar 30, 2014 1:12 pm

Some blokes are very excited by the sight of a sturdy ankle :o :lol:

A top poem Heather, Maureen has a point, maybe the name should be included.... just in the title ?
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