H'work for w/e 15.12.14 I love the smell of rain damp bush

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Maureen K Clifford
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H'work for w/e 15.12.14 I love the smell of rain damp bush

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sat Nov 29, 2014 2:19 pm

Here's my take on my own homework challenge - an Aussie flavoured Kyrielle sonnet. The photo is of my rescued pet sheep on the property Girly and Midnight. Girlie was a Merino ewe destined for the kill paddock by her previous owner when he saw she had a black lamb at foot. Her wool under suspicion now as she had a black gene. Needless to say I rescued her and Midnight her baby went on to give us 3 pure white lambs although chances were her 4th lamb would probably have had some black markings which is not desirable (to some people). I am currently knitting up Midnights 18 micron wool which I had spun - and it is a rich chocolate brown colour.

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Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Dec 10, 2014 7:14 am

Good on ya Maureen :) I don't mind a mottled colour for my hand made jumper :lol:

It is an interesting model. I suppose if you wanted to you could make several stanzas each on that pattern.
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Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Dec 10, 2014 4:42 pm

Love it Maureen!

How imaginative everyone has been with our writing challenge!

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Dec 10, 2014 5:54 pm

Thank you Neville and Shelley - I just realized that I had put the wrong one up - not that it matters greatly - this was the fine tuned version that complied with the requirement of the challenge
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Re: H'work for w/e 15.12.14 I love the smell of rain damp bu

Post by Catherine Lee » Wed Dec 10, 2014 6:51 pm

Lovely poem Maureen

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