Knowing Without Asking

[Heather]

[Maureen K Clifford]

Can you buy them things online - how lovely this is.

[Neville Briggs]

Well done Heather. Great to see you posting this Neat concise little piece.

You've been babysitting again.

[Bob Pacey]

I was waiting for one more verse to finish off ?

Seems to sort of hang ?

Bob

[Neville Briggs]

You'll get hang. It doesn't need anything more.

[Heather]

Thanks Maureen. Some things are priceless and you simply can't buy them.

You're always wanting more Bob. The last line sums it up.

Not babysitting Neville, this one was inspired by a friend.

I only wrote one poem last year so hopefully I'm off to a good start - it's a start anyway. As Leonard Cohen said, "I don’t think you can write novels on the road. You need a certain stability." Same with poetry I think.

Heather

[Bob Pacey]

Cryptic clues Neville ? what ya trying to say ? spit it out !



Bob

[Neville Briggs]

Fixed the typo Heather.


Not cryptic Bob, that's just a saying.

If it needed any more Heather would have put it in. I think that if the reader reads Heather's poem in less than two minutes they are going too fast and then will miss the completion. Poetry is not about ' once upon a time....blah blah blah bah ...............they lived happily ever after. Amen. Next

[Bob Pacey]

Does the size 150 next have a meaning ?


Bob

[Heather]

Gotcha Neville.

Two minutes might be a bit slow for this one Neville, you'd start to sound like a Queenslander! Maybe one minute - twice!