AS IT SHOULD BE

Cropduster · Post by **Cropduster** » Fri Jan 30, 2015 8:49 pm

AS IT SHOULD BE

Pennies from heaven
Water to wine
Laughter from children
Moments in time
Clearly to me
As it should be

Food for the hungry
Rivers that flow
Strength of the spirit
Learning to grow
Clearly to me
As it should be

Moonlight on water
Frost on the ground
Sun on the faces
Love all around
Clearly to me
As it should be

Copyright (c) Allan Cropper January 2015

alongtimegone · Post by **alongtimegone** » Sun Feb 01, 2015 3:41 pm

Definitely as it should be Allan. Especially the water to wine bit.

Wazza

Post by **Heather** » Mon Feb 02, 2015 11:05 am

I like it.

Cropduster · Post by **Cropduster** » Mon Feb 02, 2015 9:34 pm

Thanks Wazza and Heather

Post by **Shelley Hansen** » Mon Feb 02, 2015 9:40 pm

Excellent Allan, really well written metre and rhyme. I love uncluttered poems that paint the picture with simplicity ... and this one does just that.

Cheers Shelley

Post by **Heather** » Tue Feb 03, 2015 12:49 pm

Wazza, you and Ron would get along real good!

Catherine Lee · Post by **Catherine Lee** » Wed Feb 04, 2015 1:28 pm

Beautifully simple yet says so much - lovely poem Allan

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