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homework w/e 23/2

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Feb 24, 2015 3:42 pm

Sorry I'm late Maureen. ( and it's pretty ordinary )


CAR TRIALS

They're out there every day
stumbumbling in the way.
They can't make up their quaking minds;
those indecisive drivers.

They won't move on the green,
don't know which way to turn,
and can't decide whose giving way;
those hesitating drivers.

They will go down the up ramps,
they will go up the down ramps.
Oh ! why can't they just catch the bus;
These things are sent to try us !
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Re: homework w/e 23/2

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Feb 24, 2015 4:58 pm

Better late then never Nev As my mum used to say :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


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Re: homework w/e 23/2

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Feb 24, 2015 5:19 pm

Never a problem here Neville :lol: nothing is set in concrete and delighted you gave it a go - since the idea was yours :lol:
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Re: homework w/e 23/2

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Feb 24, 2015 5:45 pm

Shush :o :)
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Re: homework w/e 23/2

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Feb 25, 2015 8:51 am

So now we know who your offsider is Maureen.


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Re: homework w/e 23/2

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Feb 25, 2015 11:03 am

Many hands make light work Robere ;)
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