Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

All Registered Forum Users can participate in the writing exercises for the current fortnight.
Users can also participate in comment and constructive feedback in this Workshop.

Moderator: Shelley Hansen

User avatar
Shelley Hansen
Posts: 2269
Joined: Sun May 04, 2014 5:39 pm
Location: Maryborough, Queensland
Contact:

Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Shelley Hansen » Thu Apr 30, 2015 9:01 pm

It seems you've unleashed the nostalgia in all of us with your prompts this fortnight, Maureen. Here's my effort:

AMONG MY SOUVENIRS

(c) Shelley Hansen 2015

I have tiny treasure trove among my souvenirs -
a box of bric-a-brac that I've collected through the years.
They're not the sort of items you'd put under lock and key -
not worth a break and enter! But they mean the world to me.

There's half a dozen silver spoons that once belonged to Gran,
a china cup and saucer, and an oriental fan,
a little vase that's painted with the image of a rose,
a broken watch, a necklace with a clasp that doesn't close.

Some people might dismiss these things as tawdry trinkets, yet
to me they're sweet remembrances of times I can't forget -
the tokens of a childhood which was filled with work and play,
when life was so much simpler than the rat-race of today.

I still remember tea at Gran's - delicious macaroons -
the fan she used to cool herself on summer afternoons,
the image of my father winding up his watch at night
while Mum unclasped her necklace as it sparkled in the light.

The harsh reality of time has robbed us of the past.
Too soon the days grow short - for youth's sweet Springtime cannot last.
Yet still I feel a warming glow as Winter's season nears -
reliving sweetest memories ... among my souvenirs!
Shelley Hansen
Lady of Lines
http://www.shelleyhansen.com

"Look fer yer profits in the 'earts o' friends,
fer 'atin' never paid no dividends."
(CJ Dennis "The Mooch o' Life")

Terry
Posts: 3395
Joined: Mon Nov 01, 2010 6:53 pm

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Terry » Fri May 01, 2015 12:08 am

Lovely Poem Shelly

I hope you're not a hoarder of useless junk like me Shelly I have a shed pretty near full of stuff I've picked up over the years (not heirlooms that Have real meaning like yours) just odds and ends that I can't seem to bring myself to throw away.

Terry

User avatar
Bob Pacey
Moderator
Posts: 7479
Joined: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:18 am
Location: Yeppoon

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri May 01, 2015 7:31 am

Does my pencil case from grade eight count as an heirloom ?



all that stuff is in Bobs Precious Box.



Cheers Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

User avatar
Bob Pacey
Moderator
Posts: 7479
Joined: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:18 am
Location: Yeppoon

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri May 01, 2015 8:12 am

Thanks Shelly got the juices working now.



Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

Heather

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Heather » Fri May 01, 2015 8:23 am

Thanks for sharing your treasures with us Shelley. :)

User avatar
Maureen K Clifford
Posts: 8156
Joined: Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:31 am
Location: Ipswich - Paul Pisasale country and home of the Ipswich Poetry Feast
Contact:

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri May 01, 2015 9:52 am

Great use of the prompts Shelley and a lovely insight into a family's history and treasures - nicely done
Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/


I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.

User avatar
DollyDot
Posts: 215
Joined: Fri Nov 12, 2010 5:30 pm

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by DollyDot » Fri May 01, 2015 9:58 am

Nice Shelley! I think we all have those bibs and bobs.

Dot

Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri May 01, 2015 10:28 am

well done Shelley. :)
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

User avatar
Bob Pacey
Moderator
Posts: 7479
Joined: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:18 am
Location: Yeppoon

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri May 01, 2015 2:03 pm

You got your own Bobs Dot ? Come on Heather where is your effort. And yours as well Dot.
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

User avatar
Catherine Lee
Posts: 1384
Joined: Mon May 14, 2012 9:47 pm
Location: Thailand

Re: Homework WE 4/5/15 - "Among My Souvenirs"

Post by Catherine Lee » Tue May 05, 2015 2:39 pm

This is lovely Shelley - the memories such special treasures bring back to us are truly beyond price because it is not just the items themselves but the flashbacks - images, tastes, sounds and smells which they have the power to conjure up, and you have put this across beautifully.

Post Reply