H/work we 01/06/2015

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Wendy Seddon
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H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by Wendy Seddon » Fri May 22, 2015 11:36 am

You really get my flamin’ goat
you really are a pain,
you tail gate up the highway
and you cut in on my lane.

You overtake along the left,
you never indicate,
amber lights mean go for broke -
slow down for heaven’s sake!

You scream around the corners
and you strip the road of tar
you never use the foot brake
I plead – “Cool it will you Ma!”
Wen de Rhymewriter There is nothing mundane about the ordinary.
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Re: H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by Trisha Patterson » Fri May 22, 2015 12:30 pm

:lol: :lol:
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Post by Heather » Fri May 22, 2015 12:53 pm

Soo good to have you back Owly. We have missed you too!

Heather :D
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Re: H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri May 22, 2015 1:41 pm

And just where have you been and without permission as well. Great to see ya back.
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by Wendy Seddon » Fri May 22, 2015 3:19 pm

Thanks all - missed you too!!! My updated pic should give you some idea of what I've beeen up to!!
Wen de Rhymewriter There is nothing mundane about the ordinary.
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Re: H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri May 22, 2015 8:36 pm

Ah ha - Breeding :lol: and with a randy old goat I bet :o :shock: :roll: Glad to see it hasn't short circuited your poetry skills just not left you much time to pursue them - Welcome back and I like your poem :D
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Re: H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by DollyDot » Sat May 23, 2015 8:11 am

Great work on both counts Owly. Is that a pigeon pair? Poem very topical as well.
:)
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Re: H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat May 23, 2015 10:58 am

Welcome Wendy, good to see you writing, good work. :)
Neville
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Re: H/work we 01/06/2015

Post by Terry » Mon May 25, 2015 7:06 pm

Hi Owly good to hear from you again.

Good poem as well

Terry
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