Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
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Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
I want to paint the bathroom and I want it painted blue,
the man behind the counter said, “Ya gotta pick the hue.”
“There’s ‘Sudden Chill’ , a purplish tone and ‘Bitten Flesh’ less bright ,
or ‘Iron Nail’ is quite the one to catch the morning light.
‘Arctic Sun’ is yellowish but ‘Frozen Tongue’ glows pink,
and ‘Blue Frost’ has a greenish cast, so tell me what you think?”
I want it blue that’s all I know, I really am confused -
I pull a face to show my angst, the salesman’s quite amused.
the man behind the counter said, “Ya gotta pick the hue.”
“There’s ‘Sudden Chill’ , a purplish tone and ‘Bitten Flesh’ less bright ,
or ‘Iron Nail’ is quite the one to catch the morning light.
‘Arctic Sun’ is yellowish but ‘Frozen Tongue’ glows pink,
and ‘Blue Frost’ has a greenish cast, so tell me what you think?”
I want it blue that’s all I know, I really am confused -
I pull a face to show my angst, the salesman’s quite amused.
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Re: Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
Good one Owly, would be sooooo much better if they just had one.
Bob
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Re: Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
Oils ain't oils! Another imaginative poem on the topic.
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Re: Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
"Hue" have a way with words Owly!
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Re: Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
Another different angle - I would never have thought of that! Very clever
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Re: Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
Good one Owly - my husband relates to that as he is a painting contractor
He has many such discussions with clients who want "that colour like a dress my sister once had after it had faded in the sun"
Cheers, Shelley


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Re: Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
These home reno shows have got everyone on the tools it seems - thinking outside the square with this one Wendy - try picking white that's even worse
I like your poem and a innovative use of the prompts. Well done.

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Re: Homework WE 15/06/15 Singing the Blues
Very clever Owly
and once more congratulations with Henry.
Terry
and once more congratulations with Henry.
Terry