WINTER'S CALL

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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Jun 01, 2015 9:44 pm

WHOO HOO - share the hammer, you nailed it and a great use of the prompts as well Trisha. Well done
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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Trisha Patterson » Tue Jun 02, 2015 10:02 am

Thanks Maureen.
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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Jun 03, 2015 3:58 pm

Excellent and so concise, Trisha! A bit foreign to us up here in Queensland though ;)

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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Wendy Seddon » Thu Jun 04, 2015 12:23 pm

Nice one Trisha :D
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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Terry » Thu Jun 04, 2015 12:27 pm

Very well done Trish.

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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Irene » Sat Jun 06, 2015 2:09 am

Very well done Trish!!!
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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Trisha Patterson » Sat Jun 06, 2015 5:56 pm

Thanks Terry and Irene. Appreciate your comments.
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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Catherine Lee » Wed Jun 10, 2015 2:49 pm

Very nicely done Trisha - you manage to paint this picture so well in only six lines, and really make me feel the cold!
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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Jun 10, 2015 3:12 pm

You've really done well Trisha, getting Catherine to feel the cold ... I believe she is in Thailand - where the temperature doesn't drop below sweltering :lol:

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Re: WINTER'S CALL

Post by Catherine Lee » Wed Jun 10, 2015 3:41 pm

Ha! I actually nearly wrote that in my post - it is 38 degrees here at the moment and too hot even for the Thais! Thank God for air conditioning and a clever poem about the cold!
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