Homework w/e 19.1.15 - IN DOG WE TRUST

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Homework w/e 19.1.15 - IN DOG WE TRUST

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:31 am

IN DOG WE TRUST … Maureen Clifford © The #ScribblyBark Poet


You can sing for your supper – ask for a reprieve
if you’re human and you have a voice,
but when you’re a dog it’s not easy to do
and quite often they don’t have a choice.

They’ve a gusto for life that most humans don’t share
be it chasing a ball or a rabbit
and sometimes alas they get naughty when bored
if not stopped it becomes a bad habit.

But most dogs are honest, most humans are not -
humanity is corruptible.
Given the circumstances that just might suit,
tenure on life’s interruptible.

If one offers money or offers a deal
advantageous to those one would bribe,
be it cash, land or goods, cigarettes or fine wine
chances are there are those who’ll imbibe.

But offer a dog most of these things and see
his complete indifference to all;
the only thing likely to seduce his ethics …
a ham sandwich or rubber ball.
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Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Oct 06, 2015 8:22 am

But a human won't bite the doctor who touches them to examine their illness. :lol:
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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Oct 06, 2015 11:04 am

Neither will most dogs Neville :D Animals know those who love them and are trying to help them + I've been known to bite my dentist :lol:
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Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:20 pm

:shock:
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Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Oct 07, 2015 5:10 pm

Inbuilt loyalty - if we all displayed it as well as dogs do - well, enough said! I enjoyed your poetic doggy portrait, Maureen.

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Oct 07, 2015 9:07 pm

Thank you Shelley :lol:
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