Strange things are happening here!
I was sure I commented some days ago - ah well try again.
I'm certainly no judge of this sort of poetry as you know,
But it has grown since the last time I saw it - I like it.
Terry
The Power
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Re: The Power
Heather, I love it! My favourite form of writing - the metaphor! It works well with bush poetry too - but there is even more scope for imagination with free verse.
I could just see your words dancing, laughing - and looking up at you from the page
Brilliant!
Cheers
Shelley
I could just see your words dancing, laughing - and looking up at you from the page

Brilliant!
Cheers
Shelley
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Lady of Lines
http://www.shelleyhansen.com
"Look fer yer profits in the 'earts o' friends,
fer 'atin' never paid no dividends."
(CJ Dennis "The Mooch o' Life")
Re: The Power
Thanks Terry and thanks for nudging me to work on it.
Thank you Shelley. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's been a bit of fun.
Heather
Thank you Shelley. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's been a bit of fun.
Heather
