Under the Bridge Tonight

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Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Thu Jun 23, 2016 9:48 pm

Under the Bridge Tonight

It isn’t a place for the feeble of heart
Under the bridge tonight.
The rain’s horizontal. It stabs like a dart
Under the bridge tonight.
The wind races through, and it lashes your skin.
Reach, if you can, for your kith and your kin.
Search high and low for a place to stay in,
Not under the bridge tonight.

There’s only one wall, and there’s scarcely a floor
Under the bridge tonight.
Survival is nought but a grim, sodden chore
Under the bridge tonight.
The wind and the rain and the dark take a hold.
The groundsheet is wet and the blankets are cold.
All who seek shelter feel weary and old
Under the bridge tonight.

I’m grateful to lie in my house in my bed,
Not under the bridge tonight;
Cosy and snug from my toes to my head,
Not under the bridge tonight;
And I pray there is nobody out there in pain,
Exposed to the cold and the wind and the rain,
But I fear that there is, and my prayers are in vain…
Under the bridge tonight.

© Stephen Whiteside 22.06.2016
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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by Shelley Hansen » Thu Jun 23, 2016 9:59 pm

Hi Stephen

Sobering, thought-provoking, and sadly, so true. We who have warm homes and beds have so much to be thankful for.

Cheers
Shelley
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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Thu Jun 23, 2016 10:10 pm

Thank you, Shelley.
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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Jun 24, 2016 9:09 am

You've tackled a tragic theme. The reader would have to make sure that it was read slowly, it's easy to pick up the pace in that metre.
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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by mummsie » Fri Jun 24, 2016 9:52 am

Sadly, there are so many Stephen and so many of a very young age.

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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by vwalla » Fri Jun 24, 2016 9:55 am

Stephen
How so very true!
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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by alongtimegone » Fri Jun 24, 2016 7:00 pm

All of the above but, just as a piece of writing - so good. I liked the stanza structure.
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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Fri Jun 24, 2016 8:48 pm

Thank you, all.
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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by thestoryteller » Fri Jun 24, 2016 8:54 pm

Reflective thoughts Stephen and having shared rough nights in younger days it brings back a few memories.

Enjoyed the read.



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Re: Under the Bridge Tonight

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Fri Jun 24, 2016 10:26 pm

Thanks, Merv.
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