Homework for week ending 18th July 2016 - Search and Rescue

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Homework for week ending 18th July 2016 - Search and Rescue

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Jul 05, 2016 4:09 pm

SEARCH AND RESCUE ... Maureen Clifford © The #ScribblyBark Poet



The dogs gone missing,
temperature's below zero and even the pigeons shiver.
I've had no sleep,
and through the window I see the empty bench.

I turn away -
she is so small and not too old.
Outside the black tarmac ribbon stretches in both directions,
it is empty -
no dog, no cars and now I am bent on retrieval.

Lead in hand I set off, calling her name.
Will she remember it?
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Post by mummsie » Wed Jul 06, 2016 8:04 am

This one really hit home Maureen. It pretty much describes the events of the past week for our family. The old black lab from the caravan park went missing ten days ago-just up and vanished after suffering a stroke. There's no doubt she has probably succumbed to age and ill health but its the not knowing.
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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Jul 06, 2016 10:21 am

Oh that is terrible Sue -poor old girl. I sympathize completely having lost one of my dogs in similar circumstances.
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Re: Homework for week ending 18th July 2016 - Search and Res

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Jul 06, 2016 11:29 am

Oh dear Maureen, I hope that is just a work of imagination. A nice bit of free verse. :)
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Re: Homework for week ending 18th July 2016 - Search and Res

Post by Catherine Lee » Wed Jul 06, 2016 12:56 pm

Yes, very nicely done Maureen - conveys the feeling really well.

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Re: Homework for week ending 18th July 2016 - Search and Res

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Jul 07, 2016 8:36 am

Thank you Catherine and Neville ...It actually happened and scared the bejesus out of me. Came home one day to find my old girl gone, Elly is 11 now, totally deaf and going blind from cataracts and for some reason best known to her she got under the gate after a bit of digging. Whether it was because she has a new brother and felt a bit disgruntled or whether it was a senior moment I don't know. I found her but believe you me I was panicking.
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Re: Homework for week ending 18th July 2016 - Search and Res

Post by alongtimegone » Fri Jul 15, 2016 4:29 pm

Glad you found her Maureen.
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