Homework w/e 1.8.16 - TREADMILL

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Homework w/e 1.8.16 - TREADMILL

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Jul 25, 2016 2:12 pm

TREADMILL ... Maureen Clifford © The #ScribblyBark Poet

There's quirky things a'hiding in the garden
one comes across them every now and then
in unexpected places - as you walk look left and right.
See there! A chain-sawed rooster and his hen.

It's good to see folks using parks and gardens
where beds of flowers strike such a pretty note
Campanulas and foxgloves softly waving
as white doves bill and coo on the Dovecote.

Young children bike riding with Gramps and Grandma
teeter totter quite precariously
despite the training wheels that are airlifted
by little legs peddling so furiously.

Young skateboarders freewheeling round the corners
popping an Ollie, as they swoop on by;
some weekend fun to lift a jaded spirit,
enjoy the sunshine 'neath an azure sky.

The world is round and we have come full circle
as round and round we travel - fast then slow.
Infinity with no end or beginning,
from pram to bike to wheelchair - then we go.
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Post by Shelley Hansen » Mon Jul 25, 2016 6:24 pm

Very good Maureen - with the best of all endings ... an unexpected one!

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:15 pm

:lol: Not unexpected from where I'm sitting Shelley - I think the wheelchair is fast approaching
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Post by Wendy Seddon » Tue Jul 26, 2016 2:51 pm

Cycle of life. (Pun intended!)
Wen de Rhymewriter There is nothing mundane about the ordinary.

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Jul 27, 2016 1:47 pm

Yes Wen - sadly it is :cry:
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Post by David Campbell » Thu Jul 28, 2016 2:59 pm

Yes, that last stanza prompts some thinking, Maureen. BTW, what on earth is "popping an Ollie"? How far behind the times am I?

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jul 29, 2016 2:46 pm

The ollie is a skateboarding trick where the rider and board leap into the air without the use of the rider's hands.It is basically the combination of popping, kicking and jumping on the skateboard all at the same time. And here's a video clip for you David so that you can practice in private https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8xsLp6lqijo
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