Homework WE 17-10-16 - The Lazy Poet

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Homework WE 17-10-16 - The Lazy Poet

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Oct 05, 2016 6:05 pm

Goodness me, Maureen! I think these are the most challenging prompts you've ever set - for me, anyway. So I thought I'd offer this as my first attempt - definitely the work of a "Lazy Poet" ...

Through long afternoons
more dangerous than
endless duplication
of pathos
she sat
immaculate
in her
inexorable sadness

:D

I will make another attempt before the fortnight ends - hopefully!!

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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Oct 06, 2016 7:13 pm

:lol: Well done Shelley - short, sweet and to the point
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Re: Homework WE 17-10-16 - The Lazy Poet

Post by Wendy Seddon » Fri Oct 07, 2016 11:15 am

Hi kids,

I am still about, reading your triffic pomes- just working full time for a couple of months :|
I will get back to homework shortly (I hope).

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Re: Homework WE 17-10-16 - The Lazy Poet

Post by David Campbell » Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:15 pm

Reckon that takes the record for brevity, Shelley!

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Post by Shelley Hansen » Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:38 pm

Thanks Maureen and David! Yes, David, you are probably right about the brevity - as to the record for creativity ... well that's another story!! ;)

Lovely to hear from you Wen - and looking forward to sharing with you again when you get the chance. I well know how full time work saps the creativity as well as the time!!

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Re: Homework WE 17-10-16 - The Lazy Poet

Post by Catherine Lee » Tue Oct 11, 2016 5:06 pm

Well done, Shelley!...I've been in Wendy's boat lately work-wise, and am now about to head to the airport to visit my folks, so not sure how much will get written while I'm away either...(excuses, excuses)...Like Wendy however, I too am enjoying reading all these great contributions

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Re: Homework WE 17-10-16 - The Lazy Poet

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Oct 12, 2016 6:38 pm

Thanks Catherine - and I know what you mean about time, inspiration, etc etc!!

However I now have written a "proper" homework poem (it came to me in the middle of the night, and this time I wrote it down!) So you'll find it in a separate thread.

Cheers and enjoy your visit with your folks.
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