Sixteen Years.
"Your children are on loan to you."
I hate that point of view.
I'll invest my very soul
Until my life is through.
I sit with cardboard boxes
and I don't hold back the tears.
She's moving to the city -
it's been only sixteen years!
I'm packing little houses,
little dolls and fluffy bears.
She's packing little shorts and tops
and things a young girl wears.
Sneakily I secret in
old photos of our clan
Sneakily she secrets in
a lipstick - 'cause she can.
Our family tree has fruited
many confident young girls.
Not cellophane and tinsel -
but hardened, polished pearls.
Homework w/e 6th March...Sixteen Years
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Homework w/e 6th March...Sixteen Years
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Re: Homework w/e 6th March...Sixteen Years
Lovely metaphors again, Wendy! They are becoming your trademark.
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Thanks Shelley....little ol' metaphorical me! 

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Good use of the prompts linked to an unavoidable fact. Nicely done Wendy
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