Thanks Wazza,
When the first verse came to me I thought *!##*! I wonder if I could possibly maintain that for the whole poem.
But that was the verse in my head, and once in the head it is hard to dislodge, so I thought I may as well have a crack - and I'm pleased I did!
The Farmers' Strike
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Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.
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Ooowah! Robyn swore.......... 

The purpose of my life is to serve as a warning to others.
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Hi Robyn,
Great use of internal rhymes and word combinations.
A very enjoyable read and a well deserved winner - Congratulations.
Terry
Great use of internal rhymes and word combinations.
A very enjoyable read and a well deserved winner - Congratulations.
Terry
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