Poetic Inspiration

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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:04 am

Martyboy wrote:you must resist the urge
In case you didn't notice Marty, that statement is an absolute :lol:


I'll bet Stephen that you are a great fan of Ford Prefect and The Hitchhikers Guide to the Universe.

In The Great String Robbery ( The Goons ) Harry Secombe is shown two pieces of string lying apart and is told by Peter Sellers that a thief has cut a piece out of the middle and taken it. Harry then puts the two pieces together and explains that when you put the two pieces together, the outside ends get shorter. He concludes that the thief has cut off two pieces from either end, cut the middle and moved the pieces apart, giving the impression that one piece from the middle has been stolen when in fact he has stolen two outside pieces of string. :lol: The investigation must look for two stolen strings not just one. :lol: :lol:
Spike Milligan was a genius at these hilarious logical illogicals.
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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by manfredvijars » Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:09 am

String Theory is just that, a Theory ... it's not a quest for 'answers' but for better Questions.
(We have all the 'answers' already in a book that is filled with errors and contradictions - mostly hammered into a point of view, then glibly quoted to justify a position of control)

As for seeing the bigger picture (Thank you Science) the enormity of our wider expanse and our fragile existence gives me inspiration. I see ...
"The Earth rolling on her wings in the midst of a magnificent whole ... " (to be continued)

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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:30 am

Irene has posted a poem about the pain of loss. There not a scientist that ever lived and worked who could ever " explain " why we feel pain the way we do. In that vast expanse of the universe where I wonder is the string that makes the ties of love.

The book you referred to Manfred certainly does not contain all the answers. Maybe it answers what we need to know.
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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by manfredvijars » Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:19 am

Stephen Whiteside wrote:Marty, I know how far the Earth moved in the last year. Why can't somebody just tell me how far the Sun moved in the same period of time?
Do you mean the arc of the Sun's movement, in degrees from the centre of our (expanding) Spiraling Galaxy?

This may help ...
The Sun (and therefore the Earth and the Solar System) may be found close to the inner rim of the galaxy's Orion Arm, at a distance of 8.33 ± 0.35 kiloparsecs (27,200 ± 1,100 ly) from the Galactic Center.
Depending on its structure the entire galaxy has a rotational rate of 1 per 15 to 50 million years. The galaxy is also moving at a rate of 552 to 630 km per second depending on the relative frame of reference.

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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by David Campbell » Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:20 am

To return to poetry-land, here's something:

For Heather

In poetry-land are poems like sand
that slip through your fingers,
though memory lingers
of visions, so fleeting, you’ve held in your hand.

And poems of gold in tales that are told
of beauty and yearning
that leave your heart burning
on nights that are lonely, depressing and cold.

But best of them all are those you can call
your own special writing,
those poems igniting
the passion of others, with words that enthral.

© David Campbell, 2012

Keep writing!

Heather

Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by Heather » Wed Jan 04, 2012 3:30 pm

A poem for me! How special. Thank you David.

Yes, I know where you are coming from and I will, in my own way. :) And, there are others out there! :lol:

thankyou,

Heather :)

No one's ever written me a poem before... :oops:

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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by Peely » Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:07 pm

G'day All

This little thread on inspiration reminds me of a little poem that I wrote late in 2010 on the subject. I will post it up in the members' poetry section.

Regards


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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by Zondrae » Sat Jan 07, 2012 7:23 am

Thank you John,
I will go and look it up.

Can I also say - I like the way you have used the thread to point to the correct place to post the actual poem. I will try to remember to do this in future. It also occurred to me that this gives the viewer the choice of making the effort of going to the poems section and reading the poem, if they so wish. What was the poem called? .. Oh well I'm sure to find it.
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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by william williams » Sat Jan 07, 2012 8:31 am

good on you John more Members should take notice and post on the correct place

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Re: Poetic Inspiration

Post by Glenny Palmer » Sat Jan 07, 2012 11:17 am

We cop perpetual whinges about 'RULES' for poetry writing techniques....& now.... it's RULES for being spontaneous with our mates & having FUN.........????.........For @*$^ sake...!
The purpose of my life is to serve as a warning to others.

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