What Should I write ?

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Neville Briggs
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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Mar 03, 2014 2:17 pm

Your razor wire sample works fine David. I think. If you mean would it be accepted as bush poetry in a performance, I think it would go OK. In one of those writing comps probably not, because I see a lot of the conditions stated as " consistent metre " which I assume means regular or a repeated unvarying pattern throughout. This small sample appears to have rhyme pattern but irregular metre, so probably would be considered not the accepted form.
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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Heather » Mon Mar 03, 2014 3:22 pm

I'm very pleased to announce that today I have been writing! But, there's a catch. OMG, it doesn't have rhyme or metre. Is it a poem or an incoherent romp with words? - who cares. I'm writing. That's all that matters...

I'm off to see the wizard........ :D

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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Mar 03, 2014 4:32 pm

:lol: an anarchist in the ranks.
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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Heather » Mon Mar 03, 2014 4:46 pm

I am SOOO in the naughty corner! :lol:

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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Mar 03, 2014 6:29 pm

The bloody recliner is mine Heather and so are the beers in the fridge.
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Heather » Mon Mar 03, 2014 6:33 pm

:? :?

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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Mar 03, 2014 6:35 pm

In the naughty corner I've got a full time spot in there.



Wonder ya let me get away with saying (the moderator has been forced to step in and edit this post)......... though. so I won't say it again.


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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Glenny Palmer » Mon Mar 03, 2014 7:59 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Heather » Mon Mar 03, 2014 8:21 pm

You want the beer Glenny? I can't stand the stuff...

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Re: What Should I write ?

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Mar 03, 2014 8:31 pm

Some serious abuse of moderators powers here.


That's it I have had enough !


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