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Taffy

Post by Rimeriter » Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:27 pm

Sorry Maureen, been a bit busy.

Will have to track him down, probably in my hard drive archive.

Other than a few 'trail ride' horses, Taffy was the first family horse our boys rode.

The piece of rhyme tells the story -

Jim’s Jottings I. Ota. (c). Australiana. 11/97.

‘ TAFFY ‘

There came to Hartley Valley
a horse that could not dally,
he’d run and run, as that is all he knew.
Short and stocky is his stature
and his spirit we must capture
as he can only be ridden, by a few.

He came from o’er the mountain
and upon him we were countin’
allowing us to trail him far and wide.
But with the spirit in his being
we were very quickly seeing
it would take some time to get him on our side.

Tender care and different saddles
‘til your brain it fairly addles,
shoes and drenching, it just goes on and on.
Snaffle bits and other bridles,
sometimes up to you he sidles.
You begin to think - “Ah Ha”! I’ve nearly won.

Then he starts some fancy dancing
the corral is used for prancing
from the gate, then to the hitchin’ rail.
Slow him : soothe him : take command,
insist he works to your demand
or very soon -- you’ll be turning pale.

So we tried some fancy riding
and gave ourselves a hiding
attempting to create a working team.
Bending , stretching and some jumping
‘til it set our hearts a’thumping.
Now, let us try, for our extended dream.

Over hills and down the vales
neither horse nor rider quails,
two bodies - performing just as one.
Eyes are gleaming, hair is streaming
both horse and rider teaming,
perhaps right now - the race is almost won.

And now --- into the future
no more bandages or suture.
Gone and forgotten : back in the distant past.
Time races on eternal
will not slow down - it’s infernal.
Lifes just enjoyment, disappearing fast.

Make the most of this great pony
even though he may act ‘ phoney ‘.
Your companion, is seven times your zest.
If this continues replicating
perhaps yourself, you will be hating
even though you may have done your level best.

So you will ride and roam the trails
and then recount the many tales
of adventures that are stored in memory.
But the time must surely come
when he can no longer run
and finally : you lay him down
to
REST.

Rimeriter. (c).
revised-12/98.

NOTE - must transcribe it from WriteNow to word.doc

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Re: They shoot our horses - don't they?

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:10 pm

That's lovely Jim - who got the bandages and sutures :lol: :lol:

Love it - thanks for sharing :D

Cheers

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Re: Taffy

Post by Rimeriter » Tue Mar 20, 2012 11:24 am

Horses got the care and cuddles.

You know what I mean, don't you ?

The boys often looked like escapees from Outpatients.

Our youngest named his Georgie. Yep, it was way back then.

Probably the funniest event was when tiny Georgie was encouraged to 'jump' a fallen tree.
Tree too high, tummy too low.
Stranded, like a whale out of water.

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Re: Taffy

Post by mummsie » Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:06 pm

Enjoyed the read Jim
Thanks for sharing


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Re: Taffy

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:34 pm

Poor little George and I bet he was trying his hardest - hope he wasn't hurt. What a brave little horse.

I did that once with an end-loader on a contour Jim :lol: :lol: :lol: Took a lot of shifting

I'm glad you loved your horses and gave them cuddles - I loved my end loader we called her Elle -EL- Elle McPherson :lol: perfect 10 - Yeah I know really corny but it wasn't just the sheep I named
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Re: Taffy

Post by Rimeriter » Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:58 pm

Mate, I guess it takes all types !!! A bloody front end loader. Them big mechanical things ?
Okay. Whats changed. These days I see them tiny little girls perched up high in them big trucks in the mine sites.

Well, for me it was my first car - Lena.
Bu@@*%ed if I know why now.

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Re: Taffy

Post by DollyDot » Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:03 pm

Jim

What a beautiful poem and Maureen yours is as well. I can never understand how they can shoot the horses - such magnificent animals - wish there was a more humane way. I hated to see the cattle slaughtered but at least one knew it was for food.

Cheers
Dot

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Re: Taffy

Post by Rimeriter » Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:28 pm

Thank you Dot.

I am finding many family memories recorded in rhyme.

There should be one somewhere about the 'Wicked Witch of Wattle Flat".

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