an old timber cutter
an old timber cutter
and old timber cutter
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Re: an old timber cutter
A lot clearer then some of the earlier audios you have posted Bill.
I good story but I did think that some of the pauses seemed to be in mid sentence ?
Might have another listen later and see if I can let you know where.
Got a show to do soooooo awwwwwway I go.
Bob
I good story but I did think that some of the pauses seemed to be in mid sentence ?
Might have another listen later and see if I can let you know where.
Got a show to do soooooo awwwwwway I go.
Bob
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Re: an old timber cutter
You got through that without a hitch Bill. Sounds quite natural and not like you are just reading. I think the pauses that Bob mentioned being mid sentence are actually line endings of the verse. I suppose it's a matter of feel as to how much of a pause should happen at a line ending that is mid sentence.
Neville
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Re: an old timber cutter
I enjoyed that Bill, well done.
Ron

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