Homework 16th june

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mummsie
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Homework 16th june

Post by mummsie » Tue Jun 03, 2014 2:55 pm

mmmmm-couldnt really think what to call this other than "homework" :)

What is it that you ask of me my friend?
for time and patience doesn't seem enough
I've tried so hard to show you that I care
but life at times is cruel and hard to bear
confinement to a wheelchair can be tough
I understand and never could pretend
to know the inner suffering and fears
but be assured, I’ll see you through the years.
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.

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Re: Homework 16th june

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Jun 03, 2014 3:34 pm

Good on you Sue, that's nicely done :D Funny - I couldn't give mine a title either :lol:

Well that's two down for the ladies - what are you blokes up to out there? :roll:
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Re: Homework 16th june

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Jun 04, 2014 3:18 pm

Geez you blokes are hard to get on with lately :lol:
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Re: Homework 16th june

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Jun 05, 2014 9:53 am

That's excellent Sue. I reckon some of the best stuff comes from people trying out the workshop.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

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