A MOTHER'S ARMS

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DollyDot
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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by DollyDot » Thu May 07, 2015 1:52 pm

Hi Trisha

A lovely poem. Such wonderful images and true to life.

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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by Heather » Thu May 07, 2015 3:25 pm

Amazing what can be written when your world expands. I love it Trish. :) Seems the muse got through the floods to find you.
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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu May 07, 2015 4:10 pm

Nicely done Trisha and good use of the prompts as well
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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by Trisha Patterson » Thu May 07, 2015 9:30 pm

Thanks Dot, Heather & Maureen,
Hopefully the muse hangs around for a while...been missing in action of late!
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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by Heather » Thu May 07, 2015 10:12 pm

She comes when we are ready Trish :)
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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by DollyDot » Thu May 07, 2015 11:19 pm

I don't know Heather. Sometimes she comes in the dark of night and sleep has to wait as I get up and write because by morning it will be a fleeting memory.
Like you said Trish it is good when she hangs about. Amuse or bemuse?

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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri May 08, 2015 3:02 am

Put you phone by your bed and do a quick recorded note fixes that Dot or a note book if you are not phone savvy.
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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by DollyDot » Fri May 08, 2015 7:13 am

Good idea Bob but the old man thinks I ramble enough in the day let alone at night!
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Heather

Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by Heather » Fri May 08, 2015 8:26 am

We've all had those moments Dot and isn't it annoying if you don't write it down? That doesn't seem to happen to me any more.

Either way Trisha, I'm glad you are writing again. :)
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Re: A MOTHER'S ARMS

Post by Terry » Fri May 08, 2015 10:50 am

Good one Trisha you've captured that special bonding moment well.

Inspiration can be fleeting at times, so grasp it tightly when it does arrive.

Cheers Terry
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