Blue Water Bay (youtube link)

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Cropduster
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Blue Water Bay (youtube link)

Post by Cropduster » Fri May 29, 2015 3:14 pm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sleGxf6WaOU

I hope you enjoy. Remember - I never profess to be a singer!!
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Catherine Lee
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Re: Blue Water Bay (youtube link)

Post by Catherine Lee » Wed Jun 10, 2015 2:58 pm

This is lovely Allan - really enjoyed it (and there's nothing wrong with your singing!)
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Re: Blue Water Bay (youtube link)

Post by Shelley Hansen » Wed Jun 10, 2015 7:48 pm

Good one Allan :D
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Re: Blue Water Bay (youtube link)

Post by alongtimegone » Fri Jun 19, 2015 2:45 pm

I agree the singing is fine mate. suits the song too. I liked the way you built it and I liked the guitar echoing voice at the finish.
Nice.
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