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My Dreamtime
- Dave Smith
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Re: My Dreamtime
Good one Ross, as the others have said a great sentiment and so true.
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I Keep Trying
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Neville Briggs
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Re: My Dreamtime
r.magnay wrote:..yeah right Neville...don't push me mate!...
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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r.magnay
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Re: My Dreamtime
No Neville, I know you didn't refer to the spelling, but I did know it was wrong and thought you possibly noticed it...I corrected it when I saw your post with the correct spelling (phenomenon)
...I was just being a unit regarding the fact that you kept bringing up the reference to nature being characterised as a being or a person as opposed to a phenomenon.....don't worry about me...I'll get over it!... 
Where's the Doc? I have left myself open for a rebuttle from him regarding his feelings about the word "Mate", using it in that context too.....
Where's the Doc? I have left myself open for a rebuttle from him regarding his feelings about the word "Mate", using it in that context too.....
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Neville Briggs
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Re: My Dreamtime
Quite a well done poem. Good to see you having a go.
I think it's a good idea to have another look at past efforts, whether they have been revised or not, why should our members efforts just be forgotten?
And we have new members who may not have seen the earlier posts.
I'll leave it at that.

I think it's a good idea to have another look at past efforts, whether they have been revised or not, why should our members efforts just be forgotten?
And we have new members who may not have seen the earlier posts.
I'll leave it at that.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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r.magnay
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Re: My Dreamtime
Looks like it Heather!....thank you all for your comments...good and not so good 
Ross