Tomorrow Is A Promise

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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: Tomorrow Is A Promise

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Oct 02, 2014 2:47 pm

I like both versions - about time you started writing again Missy :lol: Good to see you back doing so ;)
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Re: Tomorrow Is A Promise

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:09 pm

Nice poem but a bit wishy washy for me,


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Re: Tomorrow Is A Promise

Post by Gary Harding » Thu Oct 02, 2014 4:31 pm

Wishy washy???
Tomorrow is a Promise. Geez... I wish!
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Re: Tomorrow Is A Promise

Post by warooa » Thu Oct 02, 2014 5:51 pm

Once a knight might be enough - but only if Tomorrow is a Promise ;)
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Re: Tomorrow Is A Promise

Post by Heather » Thu Oct 02, 2014 6:14 pm

Thanks Maureen. It's a re-write so don't get too excited just yet! :) I figure the fewer I write, the more each one will be worth when I am a household name! :lol: Yeah, right!

You have a copyright on Heather Knight, Gary? Scary!

Bob, go and admire the blossom! :)


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