It could be that someone we all know who we lost too soon or too young; someone who we wish we'd said something to or done something with.
We Made A Promise
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Heather
Re: A Promise Fulfilled
Did I get something past you Neville? You're slipping!
Take the specified two minutes next time
It could be that someone we all know who we lost too soon or too young; someone who we wish we'd said something to or done something with.
It could be that someone we all know who we lost too soon or too young; someone who we wish we'd said something to or done something with.
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Neville Briggs
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Slipping is what us oldies do so well.Heather wrote:Did I get something past you Neville? You're slipping!
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Heather
Re: A Promise Fulfilled
I'm sure there would have been a pony trotting along behind somewhere Matt. Sadly that promise was made in the full knowledge that it could never be met in this life but it was a happy thought we shared. Gee now you've made me all teary.
Heather
Heather
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mummsie
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And those who read between the lines will know how special she was to you Heather. She would have loved this.
Sue
Sue
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.
- Catherine Lee
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Re: A Promise Fulfilled
Another beautiful poem Heather. Especially like these lines:
filled up those prints with bubbly foam...
and watched in awe the crimson dome
filled up those prints with bubbly foam...
and watched in awe the crimson dome
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warooa
Re: A Promise Fulfilled
Of all the people I've known but never met, she's the one.
Well said, Heather.
Marty
Well said, Heather.
Marty
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Heather
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Thanks Sue - I miss her so much.
Thanks once again Catherine.
Yep, Marty, she was very special and I know how much you like her poetry. I only wish I'd met her sooner but I'm grateful for the time I had. We nearly ran off the road driving between Yeppoon and Rocky one night because we were laughing so much.
Heather
Thanks once again Catherine.
Yep, Marty, she was very special and I know how much you like her poetry. I only wish I'd met her sooner but I'm grateful for the time I had. We nearly ran off the road driving between Yeppoon and Rocky one night because we were laughing so much.
Heather
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Heather
Re: A Promise Fulfilled
I love that you all know who it is about without me having to spell it out.
Thanks all. xx
- alongtimegone
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Lovely Heather ... just a beautiful piece of writing.
Wazza
Wazza