Canis Major
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Miss "T" ... (9th August 1996 - 29th March 2010)
			
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Canis Major
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Re: Canis Major
So true Manfred - the only love that money can buy and given unreservedly.  Your girl is beautiful - was she a Shepherd /Kelpie cross?
			
									
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Re: Canis Major
Indeed Mauzy ... Miss "T" was a Shep/Boxer cross ... and the best nature from both breeds ..
			
									
									
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Re: Canis Major
Good one Manfred. You've used enjambments and caesuras to make a more conversational voice across the metric structure which I think is a skill that should be used more often by our bush poets. You've done it well.
There's another dog, the cynic. Comes from the Greek word "kynis" which means a dog because the philosopher Diogenes with his churlish pronouncements was said to be whining or snivelling like a dog.
			
									
									There's another dog, the cynic. Comes from the Greek word "kynis" which means a dog because the philosopher Diogenes with his churlish pronouncements was said to be whining or snivelling like a dog.
Neville
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