There are times when I leave it all behind 
and venture to a remote and empty place 
where nothing has meaning 
and no one has form. 
Here it is barren and silent 
and I am quite alone. 
I hang on steadfastly to the last 
drop of nothingness for I know 
that with consciousness comes the
real. And the real is what I fear most.
Wazza
			
									
									
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- Shelley Hansen
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Re: Unrhymed
Very thought-provoking, Wazza!  It sounds to me like a metaphor for marvellous, dreamless sleep!
Cheers, Shelley
			
									
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fer 'atin' never paid no dividends."
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						Lady of Lines
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"Look fer yer profits in the 'earts o' friends,
fer 'atin' never paid no dividends."
(CJ Dennis "The Mooch o' Life")
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Re: Unrhymed
Yes Shelley, it's the waking that spoils a good sleep. 
 
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- Catherine Lee
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Re: Unrhymed
I thought I'd already commented on this one Wazza but apparently not. As Shelley says, this is very thought provoking, and I like it a lot.
			
									
									
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Re: Unrhymed
Thanks Catherine.
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