Strange things are happening here!
I was sure I commented some days ago - ah well try again.
I'm certainly no judge of this sort of poetry as you know,
But it has grown since the last time I saw it - I like it.
Terry
			
									
									
						The Power
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Heather, I love it!  My favourite form of writing - the metaphor!  It works well with bush poetry too - but there is even more scope for imagination with free verse.
I could just see your words dancing, laughing - and looking up at you from the page
 
Brilliant!
Cheers
Shelley
			
									
									I could just see your words dancing, laughing - and looking up at you from the page
Brilliant!
Cheers
Shelley
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						Lady of Lines
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"Look fer yer profits in the 'earts o' friends,
fer 'atin' never paid no dividends."
(CJ Dennis "The Mooch o' Life")
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				Heather
 
Re: The Power
Thanks Terry and thanks for nudging me to work on it. 
Thank you Shelley. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's been a bit of fun.
Heather
			
									
									
						Thank you Shelley. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's been a bit of fun.
Heather